The diagram below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams represent the road maps of a grand park in two time periods 1920 and now.
over the years, many amendments took place in the area
such
as a hall for music festivals, a cafe and many more.
There are two main entrances one is from Eldon Street and the other is from Arnold Avenue.Additionally
, a new way is created in southeast
corner,which connects to the garage. After bypassing the gate, a fabulous fountain is observed at the time its built,which, is now replaced by a square-shaped rose garden with seating facilities all around. In the west, the stage for the musicians and seats are now upgraded to a sophisticated amphitheatre for concerts. Out of the three rose plantations in the corners ,only one in the northwest persists over the years.The pond for water plants is now converted into a children's play area. Add an article
the southeast
Furthermore
, fascinating water features and a cafe are constructed in the southern wing.
To conclude
, the new park has 2 rose gardens, a children's play area, a restaurant and a musical theatre.Submitted by sreya.nimmagadda9 on
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