The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money come from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given illustrations show how, in a Britain region, police money is distributed and spent and where the funds came from in the
years
2017 and 2018. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen a considerable increase in the total Law enforcement finances. Regarding the money spent, there are some differences between the Linking Words
years
in salaries and technology. Buildings and transport remained unaltered.
It is noticeable that, Use synonyms
according to
the given table, there was a steady rise in the budget force coming from the National Government and other sources not mentioned. Linking Words
Furthermore
, cash which came from local taxes witnessed a significant rise. In general, the total amount of funds had moderate growth.
About the pie chart and where the police resources were spent in both Linking Words
years
, it is interesting to note the existence of a slight decrease in worker salaries. Use synonyms
In addition
, it can be referred that technology nearly doubled its figure between 2017 and 2018. A stable pattern is visible in buildings and transport expenses across both Linking Words
years
.
In summary, there was an Use synonyms
overall
growth in the total police budget. Linking Words
While
salaries saw a slight decrease, technology funding experienced a significant increase. Linking Words
On the other hand
, expenses related to buildings and transport remained consistent.Linking Words
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