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Many people think that it would be beneficial to establish a single, global currency to make international trade and travel much easier. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Would a single currency cause any problems?

#people #currency #trade #travel
Money is
important
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 tool for trade all over the world.Different countries have their local currency, and most of them
only
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avaliable
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available
in
particular
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a particular
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region
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. It is considered that
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 a single, global currency could to a beneficial way for international trading. For sure that it
have
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 advantages in
this
 suggestion.
However
, I think there are some problems that are not essay solve. Exchanging money
while
travel
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 to other regions could be annoying
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sometimes. If governments combine the trading tools
to
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 one, the
poccess
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process
 of exchanging would be
essier
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easier
 and faster. There
are
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 no extra preparation for
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the traveller
a traveller
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traveller
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travellers
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,
while
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when
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 they want a better deal.
However
, establishing a
signle
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single
 trading tool is a difficult job
due to
 the value of everything in the world
is
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 distinct.
For example
, the rental of
single room
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single-room
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apartment
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apartments
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 in Hong Kong is 15,000 HK dollars, but renting houses in other Asia land could be lower. The
diificulty
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difficulty
 is the
difining
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defining
 the standard of price.
Furthermore
, in my opinion, it is
a
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 arduous project to
pursuade
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persuade
 all governments over the world to
agree
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 the same statement.
For instance
,
according to
 the
recoed
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records
 of specific citizens, they make fake money and utilize it to get
the
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 advantage. In fact,
that
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 government have
not
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take
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taken
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thier
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their
responsibilty
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responsibility
 to solve the problem.
Therefore
, there is no reliable
realtionship
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relationship
 between countries. In conclusion, it is important to
recogniz
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recognise
 that globalization could provide convenience in life.
However
, there are many factors
could
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 affect modifying anything to be international friendly,
such
 as the agreement of all the authorities.
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