Scientists believe that the world is in danger due to environmental changes .Some people say that personal lifestyle should be made to reduce the damage to environment, while others think that the government should do something to help. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Most science researchers believe that World is facing danger
due to
changes in the ecosystem. It is always a debatable issue
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whether the
government
or an individual is responsible to help to minimise the damage caused to the
environment
.
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my opinion. Those who favour making small changes in personal lifestyle can help reduce the damage,
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believe in the notion that change begins from home. A small change in personal lifestyle,
for instance
, careful use of water, can have a big impact on saving nature. One person can educate his/her family and other people in society resulting in giving birth to a big revolutionary change that can help in saving our natural resources.
On the other hand
, people who think it should be the responsibility of the
government
, strongly believe that imposing strict rules would be helpful. As there will be frequent checks and huge fines for anyone who is not following the rules, it is very less likely that people will commit misuse.
For example
, the Indian
government
has strictly banned the use of plastic bags and given an alternative to paper bags which has resulted in
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decline in pollution caused by plastic bags. In my opinion, as the
environment
is shared by everyone, so it should be the responsibility of the
government
as well as
the individual to use it wisely. For
this
, environmental education should be provided by the
government
in schools and colleges and from
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individual point of view, it is their responsibility to implement that knowledge in daily life, so that we can make our lives and
environment
better in every manner we can.
To conclude
, it will always be a debate, who should be responsible for a safe
environment
?
instead
of debating we should focus more on different ways to save nature in every possible way.
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