The two maps below show changes to the town of Somerville over a 10-year period.
The maps illustrate the changes taken place in the town of Somerville in 10 years.
Overall
, as we can see, a plethora of things have been constructed Linking Words
such
as restaurants, a golf course, and shops. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the route of the main Linking Words
road
has been changed.
Looking at the first map, it is easily apparent that there were 2 car parks on each Use synonyms
side
of the main Use synonyms
road
. Use synonyms
However
, the one beside the river bank got demolished. Linking Words
Moreover
, the end of the main Linking Words
road
's path was bent to the southeast Use synonyms
side
of the city toward the car park. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, in the East, between the main Linking Words
road
and the car park, the golf course has been constructed.
If we go to the West toward the river, a closed recreational area has been built which consists of a bookstore on the southest part of it, a cafe and the restaurant Use synonyms
that is
in front of it which are located in the middle of the area on the west Linking Words
side
of the town, and Use synonyms
also
two hotels on the northest Linking Words
side
, close to the river bank. There are Use synonyms
also
two shops on the different sides of the footpath, opposite each other on the South Linking Words
side
of the town.Use synonyms
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