In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problem as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, more and more
people
around the world eating too much fast food
and as a
result
leading to many Add a comma
,result
health
problems
. However
, I do not agree that the government
should add more tax
on such
food
.
There are several reasons why the government
should not increase a
Correct article usage
the
tax
on fast food
. First,
people
had a right to choose what they like to eat and they should be responsible for their own health
,
and should acknowledge what is the adverse effect of overeating fast Remove the comma
apply
food
. Second,
the price of fast food
is relatively cheap than healthy food
, the manufacturers will set a higher price and pass on the increase in costs to the customers if the government
impose more tax
on it, and it is not fair to those lower income group of people
, limiting their choices of food
.
I believe that eating too much fast food
is not the only reason of
Change preposition
for
resulting
Correct article usage
the resulting
health
problems
. People
with bad living habits such
as smoking and too much alcohol in their daily life will also
have a greater chance leading
to Change preposition
of leading
health
problems
. Besides
, citizens should have a balance
diet and do more regular exercises to get away from Change the verb form
balanced
health
problem. Add an article
a health
For example
, people
should have more vegetables and fruits in everyday
diet and have Correct pronoun usage
their everyday
a
control Remove the article
apply
of
eating too much fast Change preposition
over
food
. Furthermore
, the government
should do more promotions on healthy food
especially introduce
vegetarian Wrong verb form
introducing
food
which is good for health
and organize some health
seminars teaching people
what is the disadvantages of too much fast food
.
In conclusion, the government
impose
a higher Wrong verb form
imposing
tax
on fast food
is not the only solution to prevent people
suffering
from Change preposition
from suffering
health
problems
, and Correct article usage
a balance
balance
diet and take exercise are the keys to Wrong verb form
balanced
get
away from it.Wrong verb form
getting
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