In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problem as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, more and more
people
around the world eating too much fast Use synonyms
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and Use synonyms
as a
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leading to many Add a comma
,result
health
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problems
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However
, I do not agree that the Linking Words
government
should add more Use synonyms
tax
on Use synonyms
such
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food
.
There are several reasons why the Use synonyms
government
should not increase Use synonyms
a
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the
tax
on fast Use synonyms
food
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First,
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people
had a right to choose what they like to eat and they should be responsible for their own Use synonyms
health
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,
and should acknowledge what is the adverse effect of overeating fast Remove the comma
apply
food
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Second,
the price of fast Linking Words
food
is relatively cheap than healthy Use synonyms
food
, the manufacturers will set a higher price and pass on the increase in costs to the customers if the Use synonyms
government
impose more Use synonyms
tax
on it, and it is not fair to those lower income group of Use synonyms
people
, limiting their choices of Use synonyms
food
.
I believe that eating too much fast Use synonyms
food
is not the only reason Use synonyms
of
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for
resulting
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the resulting
health
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problems
. Use synonyms
People
with bad living habits Use synonyms
such
as smoking and too much alcohol in their daily life will Linking Words
also
have a greater chance Linking Words
leading
to Change preposition
of leading
health
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problems
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Besides
, citizens should have a Linking Words
balance
diet and do more regular exercises to get away from Change the verb form
balanced
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health
problem. Add an article
a health
For example
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people
should have more vegetables and fruits in Use synonyms
everyday
diet and have Correct pronoun usage
their everyday
a
control Remove the article
apply
of
eating too much fast Change preposition
over
food
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
government
should do more promotions on healthy Use synonyms
food
especially Use synonyms
introduce
vegetarian Wrong verb form
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which is good for Use synonyms
health
and organize some Use synonyms
health
seminars teaching Use synonyms
people
what is the disadvantages of too much fast Use synonyms
food
.
In conclusion, the Use synonyms
government
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impose
a higher Wrong verb form
imposing
tax
on fast Use synonyms
food
is not the only solution to prevent Use synonyms
people
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suffering
from Change preposition
from suffering
health
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problems
, and Use synonyms
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a balance
balance
diet and take exercise are the keys to Wrong verb form
balanced
get
away from it.Wrong verb form
getting
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