Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and techology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

There are many subjects in university that people can choose,

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however

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some of them argued which subjects are better for their

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. Science and technology are the most known

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powerful subjects than the other. But, not all students can be enjoyed

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those

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learning

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, they prefer to

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the

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class that they want.

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will be given both views and authors' opinions. On the one hand, is it true that all studies related to science and IT are useful for the

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those studies are following present

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unlike

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history or literature which studied

about

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the past.

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, parents should measure their

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learning capability and

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passion.

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, it is okay for

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to take

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course as long as he or she is feeling passionate.

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universities

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students have an age range between 17 to 20 which a golden age for gain new knowledge and

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.

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chance should not be missed by the youth, so their parents and teachers should let them

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enroll

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the class that they want. Personally,

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agree with

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, there are a lot of cases where adult take their career

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totally different from their educational background. In my view, it is fine if someone

want

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to study a subject that he or she wants. For those people who take science and

technology related

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major

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, it will be good for them because it can lead them to be an expert in the

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students

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the opposite, they can take extra courses if they want to switch

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, nowadays there are a lot of platforms or organisations that will provide fresh

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to develop

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skills that

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for the

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