The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts the process of recycling
plastic
bottles
that are used by us in our daily life.
Overall
, it has been noted that the whole process of recycling plastic
bottles
follows nine crucial steps outlined in the diagram.
Initially
, the first step
begins by throwing empty bottles
into the public trash bin then
the second steps begin in which the municipal track carries out all plastic
bottle and transport them to the designated recycling center
. Change the spelling
centre
Thereafter
in the recycling center
employees sort out and separate Change the spelling
centre
bottles
that can be used in the next stage. In the fourth step
, all bottles
are compressed into cubical form blocks. Whereas
in the fifth step
, the two-wheel machine crushes the blocks into plenty of small pieces in a box.
Moreover
, plastic
pieces are used to make plastic
pellets in another step
pellets are heated to form raw material, and then
stored in bags on the table. Finally
, these raw materials are used in making different kinds of essential products namely bottles
, pencils, boxes, and T-shirts.Submitted by msulemanm9 on
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