The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts the process of recycling
plastic
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bottles
that are used by us in our daily life.
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Overall
, it has been noted that the whole process of recycling Linking Words
plastic
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bottles
follows nine crucial steps outlined in the diagram.
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Initially
, the first Linking Words
step
begins by throwing empty Use synonyms
bottles
into the public trash bin Use synonyms
then
the second steps begin in which the municipal track carries out all Linking Words
plastic
bottle and transport them to the designated recycling Use synonyms
center
. Change the spelling
centre
Thereafter
in the recycling Linking Words
center
employees sort out and separate Change the spelling
centre
bottles
that can be used in the next stage. In the fourth Use synonyms
step
, all Use synonyms
bottles
are compressed into cubical form blocks. Use synonyms
Whereas
in the fifth Linking Words
step
, the two-wheel machine crushes the blocks into plenty of small pieces in a box.
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Moreover
, Linking Words
plastic
pieces are used to make Use synonyms
plastic
pellets in another Use synonyms
step
pellets are heated to form raw material, and Use synonyms
then
stored in bags on the table. Linking Words
Finally
, these raw materials are used in making different kinds of essential products namely Linking Words
bottles
, pencils, boxes, and T-shirts.Use synonyms
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