The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. The diagram below
This
figure depicts the sugar
made from cones. is clear from the diagram that there were 7 steps to make crystal sugar
.
According to
what is shown the sugar
cones stay 12 to 18 months to be ready for cutting, and the harvesting stage used a car cuter or manual. After the ,harvesting they put them in a huge blander to crush the canes and separate the sugar
juice from the cones. The juke was cleaned in a limestone filter.
Moreover
, after filtering ,area
they moved to the evaporator to make a heavy juke of cold syrup. Until now Correct article usage
the area
this
sugar
was not ready, so they put the syrup in the centrifuge to separate the crystals from it. Lastly
, they dried and cooled the crystals and give us the final result.
To sum up
, we could say that sugar
has many hard processes, One of them waiting for
12 to 18 months to grow and do six steps to give us the clean
crystals.Correct your spelling
clear
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