The system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you about the garbage
collection system
not working properly at our place, and the problems it is causing.
To begin
with the collection system
, the trucks have collected garbage
twice a week. However
, it has changed now. Thus
, a lot of garbage
has been piling up in the neighbourhood. Furthermore
, we dumped garbage
in three different bins – segregating between food, plastic and paper, but now we dump it into one bin. Moreover
, the garbage
collectors have been asking for money from us in order to collect the garbage
. Therefore
, I feel the system
has been falling apart, and your attention to this
is required.
Due to
the broken system
, there are developments of insects and bacteria in our neighbourhood. This
is leading to various diseases, and a lot of people in our neighbourhood have admitted themselves to hospitals for treatment. Also
, there has been a bad smell felt by us making it difficult to live in our homes.
In order to fix this
problem, the local council should do a regular audit of the records of the garbage
collection points. Furthermore
, disciplinary actions should be taken against the staff members who violate the guidelines set by the local council. Moreover
, legal proceedings have to be taken for them.
I look forward to hearing from you, and if you need any further
information, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours Sincerely
Isuru BandaraSubmitted by isuru.cima on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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