The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates Scotland's
revenue
from exporting globally and in the
UK
by more than eight industries in the year 2014.
Overall
, the highest
export
earning came from 'Business
Services
& Finance, Hotels & Restuarant
Services
'
while
'Chemical & Mineral Products' and 'Manufacturing of Food & Drink' shared the highest market
revenue
from the
UK
to Scotland's
export
.
According to
the data,
export
to the rest of the world except the
UK
was the most significant of the
revenue
. The total
revenue
was approximately 80
billion
, which was double from exporting to the rest of the
UK
. 'Business
Services
& Finance, Hotels & Restuarant
Services
' gained the highest
revenue
, it accounted for 13.8
billion
. 'Chemical & Mineral Products', 'Wholesale & Retail','Other Manufacturing', and 'Manufacturing of Food & Drink' shared the next highest
revenue
from global, 9.5, 8.2, and 5.9 respectively
while
in the
UK
combined these three industries at 12
billion
pounds.
In contrast
, 'Electrical & Instrument Engineering' was the highest total
revenue
(4
billion
) from the rest of the
UK
and exceed the global by over 2
billion
pounds. For 'Other
services
' and 'Agriculture, Forestry, Fishing & Mining, shared the lowest profit from Scotland's
export
at 3.9 and 3, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words revenue, uk, export, services, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • exports
  • Scotland
  • rest of the UK
  • rest of the world
  • comparisons
  • total value
  • higher
  • percentage
  • steady increase
  • fluctuating trend
  • significant contribution
  • export market
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