The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates Scotland's
revenue
from exporting globally and in the UK
by more than eight industries in the year 2014.
Overall
, the highest export
earning came from 'Business Services
& Finance, Hotels & Restuarant Services
' while
'Chemical & Mineral Products' and 'Manufacturing of Food & Drink' shared the highest market revenue
from the UK
to Scotland's export
.
According to
the data, export
to the rest of the world except the UK
was the most significant of the revenue
. The total revenue
was approximately 80 billion
, which was double from exporting to the rest of the UK
. 'Business Services
& Finance, Hotels & Restuarant Services
' gained the highest revenue
, it accounted for 13.8 billion
. 'Chemical & Mineral Products', 'Wholesale & Retail','Other Manufacturing', and 'Manufacturing of Food & Drink' shared the next highest revenue
from global, 9.5, 8.2, and 5.9 respectively while
in the UK
combined these three industries at 12 billion
pounds.
In contrast
, 'Electrical & Instrument Engineering' was the highest total revenue
(4 billion
) from the rest of the UK
and exceed the global by over 2 billion
pounds. For 'Other services
' and 'Agriculture, Forestry, Fishing & Mining, shared the lowest profit from Scotland's export
at 3.9 and 3, respectively.Submitted by gor_toey on
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