The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given bar chart illustrates Scotland's

revenue

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from exporting globally and in the

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by more than eight industries in the year 2014.

Overall

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, the highest

export

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earning came from 'Business

Services

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& Finance, Hotels & Restuarant

Services

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while

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'Chemical & Mineral Products' and 'Manufacturing of Food & Drink' shared the highest market

revenue

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from the

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to Scotland's

export

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According to

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the data,

export

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to the rest of the world except the

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was the most significant of the

revenue

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. The total

revenue

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was approximately 80

billion

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, which was double from exporting to the rest of the

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. 'Business

Services

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& Finance, Hotels & Restuarant

Services

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' gained the highest

revenue

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, it accounted for 13.8

billion

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. 'Chemical & Mineral Products', 'Wholesale & Retail','Other Manufacturing', and 'Manufacturing of Food & Drink' shared the next highest

revenue

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from global, 9.5, 8.2, and 5.9 respectively

while

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in the

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combined these three industries at 12

billion

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pounds.

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, 'Electrical & Instrument Engineering' was the highest total

revenue

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billion

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) from the rest of the

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and exceed the global by over 2

billion

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pounds. For 'Other

services

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' and 'Agriculture, Forestry, Fishing & Mining, shared the lowest profit from Scotland's

export

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at 3.9 and 3, respectively.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

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