Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. Some people believe they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned. Other people, however, say they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In the current age, It is affirmed by the majority of movie

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that cruel and vicious shows, which have a wide reputation in our societies, deplorably and seriously affect our community’s citizens` mindset. (O) others deem that the more violence in media exists, the more pleasure it will fetch. From my perspective, I consent to the first opinion, and the essay will illustrate that in the upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand, owing to the widespread of drastic movies and games, felonies rates have increased exponentially in our countries.

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, as most juveniles and adolescents unconsciously

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to apply what they watch, they perpetrate a plethora of wrongdoings without considering the ensuing aftermaths

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their actions. As an example, there was a rough crime, which took place in

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in 2019, when a teenager killed his brother to apply the instructions of the prominent game at that time which was called ‘’ The Blue Whale``.

On the other hand

, other onlookers opine that atrocities should exist in most films because they will bring considerable suspension and thrills.

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, not only, do these violent scenes render their audience excited and enthusiastic, but

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they let them embrace illusion and fantasy as the plurality of these footages do not occur in reality,

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, most

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movies, which contain ghosts or people who have teratogenic manifestation, do not have any relationship with our factual life, or we seldom live that experiment. In conclusion,

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essay has provided the points mentioned above, it can be reiterated that some viewers or players believe that brutality should significantly

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media platforms, I definitely oppose that belief because of its passive sequels on our societies.

Finally

, it is predicted that criminalities proportions will dramatically upsurge

due to

the ubiquitous production of severe applications and films.