Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources such as forests, animals, and clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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We know industrial in the world development more and more .

Humans

are using natural

resources

extremly

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extremely

wastefully . Peoples use natural

resources

indiscriminately for

industrilization

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industrialisation

brings a repercussion for the natural

resources

. For

year

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the world are losing important losing natural

resources

but

forest

natural

resources

are decreasing important .

There fore

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need

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save

forest

resources

before the

forest

might

dissapear

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disappear

. We

need

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save

forest

resources

because

forest

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play

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important

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role in

humans

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life .The first

forest

is the lung green of

earth

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. It provides oxygen for

humans

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earth

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humans

want to get more

factory

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and make

produce

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from trees,

humans

destruct the

forest

and

animal

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animals

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lose their

home

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.The

sencond

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second

forest

protect

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the durability and natural development of the soil ,

forest

can avoid natural disasters

such

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disaster

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viet

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nam

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there have been many

landslide

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that

have

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killed a lot of people. So we

need

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save

forest

sources.

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is decreasing more and more so we need

resistant

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to change. We must have

solution

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a solution

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to save

forest

sources . People should eradicate cutting down

forest

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forests

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and plant a lot of

tree

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trees

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. People

not

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use

forest

resources

indiscriminately for

industrilization

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industrialisation

.Building protected areas and national parks to protect

forest

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forests

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have many

role

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for

humans

and we must totally stop

activitie

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activities

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repercussion

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repercussions

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the forest

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forest

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need

protect

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because

protect

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forest

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is protecting the world from dangerous

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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234 words

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Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources such as forests, animals, and clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Many people believe that countries should produce food for the whole population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People, who go to live in other countries should follow the customs and tradition of the new country, to what extent to do you agree or disagree?

People believe that some individuals are born with leadership skills, while others think that leadership skills can be made. Discuss both views.

With advancing technology, the development of automated vehicles is becoming reality. In your opinion, what are the advantages and disadvantages of self-driving vehicles?