The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graphs depict some information about the Brindell in the years 1800, 1900
as well as
2000 in three different maps.
Overall
as it can ostensibly be seen,
farmland
of crops and woodlands border in the area have been replaced by Bun Hill Park. Other features like the industrial zone
has
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emerged and the village of workers have been replaced with animal part of
farmland
through these years. In the first century, there is an obvious expansion in
farmland
and a reduction in woodlands. At the same time, there is the emergence of some industrial units
while
the animal side of the
farmland
is replaced by a village for workers. From another angle, The second century specialised in replacements. Bun Hill Park is a new border line of
farmland
from crops area with woodland
while
both industries and the village of Bun Hill are experiencing a great extension to mentioned
farmland
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words farmland with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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