A friend of yours is thinking of going camping this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter; 1.Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday 2.Describe some possible disadvantages 3.Say whether youd like to go camping with your friend this summer.

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Dear Touqa, I was delighted to hear that you’re considering going camping near Niagara Falls at the beginning of July. It is very beautiful up there and I’d be happy to give you a few tips as I’ve already camped there before. Niagara Falls is a gorgeous national treasure here in Canada, you can set up tents near the waterfall. During the
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, you could take a swim in the water nearby, take pretty photos with the beautiful backdrop, and you could make smores around a campfire at night-time. It’s a great opportunity to relax, wind down and enjoy the scenery. Please keep in mind that there might be crawling insects that could get into your tent and bite you
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the weather is sometimes unpredictable over there, and it might be humid. A remedy would be to get an insect repellent spray and wear loose but covering clothing. If it’s okay with you, I’d love to join you on your trip. I think we’ll have a blast! All the best, Mona
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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  • moreover
  • also
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