The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two line charts provide information about the changing proportion of families in several mechanical appliances and the
amount
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number
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of
hours
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spent by people in a
week
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on house chore activities. Both from 1920 to 2019 in a specific country.
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, it is noticeable the most dominant usage was for refrigerators and vacuum cleaners
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a decreased number of
hours
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spent by people in a
week
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from time to time.
According to
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the first line graph, society predominantly used mechanical tools
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as refrigerators and vacuum cleaners. Starting at a fairly similar level, the percentage of both usage was at 40% and 30% in 1920, respectively, before reaching 70% in 1960.
While
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refrigerators usage continued to rise and peaked at 100% in 2019, washing appliances showed the opposite, which decreased slightly to just below 70%, the lowest in that year and marginally increased to just above 70%
at the end
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of the period. Turning to the second line chart, the public spent less time doing housework in a
week
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. Having started at 50
hours
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, it gradually fell to 10
hours
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in a
week
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and remained stable until the year 2000 before closing at 10
hours
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in 2019.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, week with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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