The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
The data presented in the table illustrates changes in means of transport in England from 1985 to 2000.
Overall
, In all modes the average distance in miles
, that people travelled, increased significantly over the time period, and the average distance travelled by car also
increased noticeably.
First people in England travelled an average of 4770 miles
in the year
1985, which then
rose up to 6475 miles
in 2000. Car was by far the most common mode of travel in both years escalated from 3199 in the year
1985 to 4806 in the year
2000.
Moreover
, travelling by train was the third most common mode of transportation in the year
2000 with an increase from 289 to 366. Although
, the average distance in miles
went up in trains and taxis (from 13 to 42), in modes like foot, bicycle and local bus decreased the average miles
, from 255 to 237, 51 to 41 and 429 to 274 respectively over the given time period.Submitted by shanikamaduri on
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