Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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number of

children

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to spend a

lots

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of

times

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with

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using

on

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their

smartphones

everydays

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every day

everyday

. There are

some

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few reasons with

supplement

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of

this

, and I believe that the

development

of the influences is beneficial by

smartphones

. First of all, comparing the

development

of technology in the past and in the present is the most significant

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for a decade in our lives. At least ten years ago, we could not

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expect

that most

of

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people had their own mobile devices, so there were many things to hang out with friends and family without electronic products.

However

, the

children

who were born in the recent generation after launching of the

smartphones

are used to

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their time with their devices.

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,

a

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number of working parents increasing

in

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these days. It

also

makes

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change that their

children

need to spend time by themselves, and they need to ensure that able to contact them in

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.

This

is the important reason why parents give

a

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smartphones

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smartphones

to their

children

. To illustrate, there are some benefits of

development

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of

this

case. We can see that

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number of various and interesting entertainment sources

such

as games, Youtube, and Netflix have been launched and updated by people’s supply. Many

children

tend to spend time lonely, so

this

can be a good way for them.

Furthermore

,

children

can have a

greatable

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treatable

greatly

great able

of

education

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sources which

includes

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online-class, and e-books with less cost

compare

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to offline

contents

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. In conclusion, using

smartphones

is

a pros

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development

to

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children

by

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enjoyable

contents

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and

in

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terms of education.