The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart represents the various modes of devices for the means of entertainment amongst the general public in Canada which falls in the age category of 18-25 during two different years.
Overall
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, the percentage of the usage of tablets, flat-screen TV and mobile phone rose
while
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that of desktop computers, conventional TV and laptop decreased in the year 2019 in comparison to that of 2009. As compared to 2009, in 2019, the use of tablets increased to 19% from 5%, 26% for mobile phones
in contrast
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to 15% in 2009 and saw the largest rise in a flat-screen television and the value stood at 27% . So, there is an increment across these 3 mediums. On the other side, the numbers fell for desktop computers, conventional TV and laptop in 2019 with the first on the list closing at 12%, the second at 4% which is the sharpest downfall and
lastly
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, the laptop closing at 12%.
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