The map shows the comparison of changes in the library before and after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Write within 150 words.
The two maps show the layout of the
library
and how it has changed over five years.
One of the biggest changes to the Use synonyms
library
was the table setting. In the past, there are eight single tables, after 5 years, they have been replaced with four long tables. Use synonyms
In addition
, the table allocated for newspapers and periodicals was displaced by films and DVDs. Linking Words
It is clear that
the Linking Words
library
was the addition of two computers.
It is noteworthy that the librarian's desk was still located during the period. Use synonyms
However
, after five years, there were many genres added to the Linking Words
library
Use synonyms
such
as economics, kitchen, and fiction. The space Linking Words
of
fiction was moved to next to the tables, and Change preposition
for
this
space was added to the children's books.
Linking Words
Overall
, it is evident that the Linking Words
library
has developed during the period since it Use synonyms
was
added various genres. Unnecessary verb
apply
In addition
, it is noteworthy two computers added.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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