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Sport Should Be Compulsory In School. To What Extent Do You Agree Or Disagree?

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In the modern world, it is argued that the differential in people’s work and income becomes more and more severe. There are some people earning a lot of money in exchange for working overtime,
whereas
 others are not only unemployed but
also
 have their time wasted, and there is no middle ground.
Therefore
, I strongly support the argument for the following reasons.
Firstly
, social destabilization is the consequence of the recent economic crisis and the affection of Covid-19 pandemic. Covid-19, the rapid increase in oil
price
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 and so on have made all the enterprises struggle to survive, so cutting down their personnel is a solution. There is a piece of recent research conducted by the Vietnamese government found that over 95
percent
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 of companies in Vietnam have terminated their workers.
Also
, to maintain
the
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work efficiency and
their
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profit, the remained employees have to overwork with a huge salary. So,
this
 social issue now is understandable.
Secondly
, another reason is the labour’s accomplishment. If there is a termination, the corporations always consider
to lay
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 off those who are not certificated or not as high productivity as the others.
Also
, there are a number of careers that can be replaced by robots. With the advanced technology, many occupations in
company
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companies
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 that are repeated and facile will only have robots taken over.
This
 is the reason for the severe social destabilization today. In conclusion, social destabilization today is alarming.
However
, it is contemporary and we now recover from
Covid-19
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 pandemic. So, we now are standing a good chance to decrease the unbalance in people’s work and salary.
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