You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

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Dear Mr. Alan, I

hope

this

email finds you well. I am writing

this

email to formally request to terminate the rent

contract

two months early. My name is Jonathan Shetas, and I am currently renting a flat on 6 Galloway St for the

last

five months. As I am sure, you are aware that I am a good tenant, as I always pay my rent on time and I did not cause any damage to the flat. The current

contract

runs for twelve months, which means that the

contract

ends in June 2024.

However

due to

unforeseen circumstances, my manager asked me to relocate to Singapore earlier than planned, which means that I will need to leave the apartment in April 2024, and it is beyond my control. One of the

contract

clauses stated that the tenant cannot terminate the

contract

early unless allowed.

Therefore

, with the situation beyond my control, I

hope

to get your permission to allow me to break the lease. I am

also

aware of the consequences of breaking the

contract

, but I was hoping that you

will

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would

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not penalise me, and return me back the rental bonds. I

hope

you take my request into consideration and I

hope

to hear from you soon. Kind regards, Jonathan Shetas

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task response

Provide clear indication of the need to leave the flat two months early due to work relocation.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure to maintain a logical sequence in presenting the reasons for leaving the flat early and the request for permission to break the contract.

lexical resource

Use a wider range of vocabulary to express the situation and concerns more eloquently.

grammatical range

Pay attention to sentence structure and tenses to enhance clarity and precision in communication.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

213 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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