The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.
The chart given illustrates the
population
of three mammals in the Gormez Straits: seals
, whales
, and dolphins, from 2006 to 2018 in a quadrennial period. Overall
, the number
of species population
for dolphins kept increasing every four
years
, compared to the other two mammals where the population
rates were fluctuating.
Firstly
, the number
of dolphins in 2006 only reached almost 20. The number
raised every quadrennial to approximately more than 20 in 2010, roughly more than 30 in 2014, and elevated into more than half of the population
in 2006 to around 50 in 2018. In contrast
to the other creatures, dolphins’ population
rates increased steadily while
seals
and whales
’ growth went fluctuate
.
In 2006, roughly more than 40 of the Wrong verb form
fluctuated
seals
existed in Gormez Straits while
the number
of whales
only reached approximately half of it. In 2010, the population
of seals
went south to half of the number
in the previous four
years
but the whale population
increased a little to almost 30. In the next four
years
, the seal population
rose to more than 30, meanwhile
there were only roughly 20 Add a comma
,meanwhile
whales
in 2014. Four
years
later, the growth of seals
jumped up to more than 40 and followed by whales
to almost 30 in 2018.Submitted by haniffa.ap on
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