The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.
The chart given illustrates the
population
of three mammals in the Gormez Straits: Use synonyms
seals
, Use synonyms
whales
, and dolphins, from 2006 to 2018 in a quadrennial period. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of species Use synonyms
population
for dolphins kept increasing every Use synonyms
four
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years
, compared to the other two mammals where the Use synonyms
population
rates were fluctuating.
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Firstly
, the Linking Words
number
of dolphins in 2006 only reached almost 20. The Use synonyms
number
raised every quadrennial to approximately more than 20 in 2010, roughly more than 30 in 2014, and elevated into more than half of the Use synonyms
population
in 2006 to around 50 in 2018. Use synonyms
In contrast
to the other creatures, dolphins’ Linking Words
population
rates increased steadily Use synonyms
while
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seals
and Use synonyms
whales
’ growth went Use synonyms
fluctuate
.
In 2006, roughly more than 40 of the Wrong verb form
fluctuated
seals
existed in Gormez Straits Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
whales
only reached approximately half of it. In 2010, the Use synonyms
population
of Use synonyms
seals
went south to half of the Use synonyms
number
in the previous Use synonyms
four
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years
but the whale Use synonyms
population
increased a little to almost 30. In the next Use synonyms
four
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years
, the seal Use synonyms
population
rose to more than 30, Use synonyms
meanwhile
there were only roughly 20 Add a comma
,meanwhile
whales
in 2014. Use synonyms
Four
Use synonyms
years
later, the growth of Use synonyms
seals
jumped up to more than 40 and followed by Use synonyms
whales
to almost 30 in 2018.Use synonyms
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