Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result, we cannot trust information we read there. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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As the development of the

internet

is very massive, every person can share

information

nowadays. In my opinion, not all of the

information

that has been shared is reliable as everyone can be a reporter at the moment and we have to filter

information

as a result

This

essay will discuss why we have to be careful when we received

information

Firstly

, not all

internet

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citizen is reliable and compatible when sharing

information

. Every person was made different, especially in knowledge and competencies.

As a result

ideally

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,ideally

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all of the

information

must be confirmed by the experts of that

information

to prevent false narratives.

For example

, the Banten tsunami in 2018 was reported as a tidal wave at first. But, after several confirmations, the waves were derived from Anak Krakatau Mountain's landslides and are considered tsunamis.

Furthermore

, for several pieces of

information

such

as news, we have to know whether our sources are the first witness or not. In

this

era,

information

is spread quickly and in some cases, even the distortion of

information

is made to reduce the reputation of someone or some institutions.

This

distortion is very dangerous as it can divide our community. For illustrate, well-known distorted news in Indonesia was about a police murder by a general that had been distorted as the consequence of sexual violence that he had made against the general's wife.

This

news became one of the biggest scandals in 2022. To tackle

this

problem, we have to confirm the

information

to the first witness of a tragedy, crime, or incident.

To conclude

these discussions, I want to reinstate that we need to clarify the

information

that we got to prevent the wrong

information

. The

internet

itself has a lot of reliable sources that are useful for checking the reliability of the

information

Moreover

, the

internet

already has fact-checking applications to improve our awareness of true

information

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