The charts show the main methods of transport of people traveling to one university in 2004 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts show the main methods of transport of people traveling to one university in 2004 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given graph illustrates the main means of transportation of society commuting to one university from 2004 to 2009. As can be seen from the proportion of chart, buses, bicycles and walking witnessed an increase
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there was a decrease in the share of cars and trains between 2004 and 2009.
Moreover
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, trains were less popular during the research period. Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that the percentage of buses rose sharply from 33% in 2004 to reach the highest point of 46% in 2009
due to
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new bus stop construction in 2008. Following that, bicycles accounted for 9% in 2004, which grew quickly to 2009, 16%.
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, there was a sudden and large reduction in the proportion of cars from 51% in 2004 to 28%
at the end
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of the period because car parking was reduced in the university in 2006.
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, trains hit the lowest point during the research duration.
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