The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table illustrates information about the fund that would allocate to the
police
for two years while
the pie charts portray the percentage of police
expenditure.
Overall
it can be seen that police
funding increased over the given year and the largest resource of police
funds came from the National government. The highest expenditure component is for Salaries (officers and staff), while
the lowest is for the technology sector.
Looking at the table in more detail, resource funds from the National Government and other sources (eg grants) increased by only about 0.5 to 2.3 million
. In 2017, National Government provide 175.5 million
while
the number increased by 2.3 million
in the next year and accounted for 177.8 million
in 2018.Submitted by Deddymus on
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