Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism bring more advantages or disadvantages to a country?

Tourism

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industry

is considered

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the backbones

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backbones

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of

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the economic

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economic

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economy

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is

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in

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some countries. In my

perspective

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the merits of

tourism

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the tourism

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industry

are outweighed

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the demerits. On the one hand, there are

serveral

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several

downsides of

tourism

for the

host

country

.

Firstly

, tourists can have a negative

impacts

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impact

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on the environment.

This

is because some

toursit

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tourists

treval

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travel

using vehicles or air

plane

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planes

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rather than

use

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using

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eco-friendly way of transport

such

as

,

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apply

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buses, trains,

subways

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and subways

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.

Therefore

,

this

behaviour will

contributes

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contribute

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to increases Co2 emissions

as well as

climate change and global warming.

Furthermore

, some

trourists

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tourists

adopt unacceptable behaviour namely,

discard

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the rubbish in oceans or lakes, which

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this

can contribute to water pollution.

On the other hand

, I would like to argue that the advantages of

tourism

is

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outweigh

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

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. The first benefit, the

tourime

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tourism

industry

play

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plays

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a significant role to boosts the economy of the

host

country

.To put

in

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it in

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other words,

the

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tourists spend a considerable amount of money

in

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on

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hotels , food,

goods

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and goods

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, which can

leads

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lead

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to

prosper

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prospering

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of

economy

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the economy

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host

country

.

Furthermore

,

this

can encourage the governments to make improvements in infrastructure

such

,

public

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as public

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transport, airports,

attraction

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and attraction

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places in order to attract tourists ,which

this

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can

positive

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be positive

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for individuals and society.

Secondly

,

tourism

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the tourism

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industry

can create jobs opportunity and income for local people.

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, thousands of jobs can create for people in hotels,shopping

centers

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, museums. In conclusion, it seems to me that the

tourism

industry

can create both negative and positive impacts in

host

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the host

a host

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country

,

however

, In my opinion, the pros of

tourism

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the tourism

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industry

far outweigh the cons.