Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism bring more advantages or disadvantages to a country?

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is considered
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some countries. In my
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the merits of
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the tourism
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are outweighed
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the demerits. On the one hand, there are
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several
downsides of
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for the
host
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country
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.
Firstly
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, tourists can have a negative
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on the environment.
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is because some
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tourists
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travel
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rather than
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eco-friendly way of transport
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as
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buses, trains,
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.
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,
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behaviour will
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to increases Co2 emissions
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climate change and global warming.
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, some
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tourists
adopt unacceptable behaviour namely,
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the rubbish in oceans or lakes, which
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this
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can contribute to water pollution.
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, I would like to argue that the advantages of
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outweigh
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the disadvantages
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. The first benefit, the
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tourism
industry
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play
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a significant role to boosts the economy of the
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country
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.To put
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other words,
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tourists spend a considerable amount of money
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hotels , food,
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, which can
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to
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of
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host
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country
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.
Furthermore
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,
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can encourage the governments to make improvements in infrastructure
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,
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transport, airports,
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places in order to attract tourists ,which
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can
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be positive
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for individuals and society.
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,
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the tourism
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industry
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can create jobs opportunity and income for local people.
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, thousands of jobs can create for people in hotels,shopping
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, museums. In conclusion, it seems to me that the
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industry
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can create both negative and positive impacts in
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host
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the host
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country
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,
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, In my opinion, the pros of
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tourism
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the tourism
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far outweigh the cons.
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