The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English house.

The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average  English house.
The given line graph illustrates the typical daily demand for
electricity
in
winter
and
summer
, and the pie chart represents the proportion of different
electricity
usage in an English home.
Overall
, the requirement
of
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the
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electricity
much
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more
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higher in
winter
than in
summer
,
in contrast
,
the
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electricity
mostly
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used for heating purposes. The demand for
electricity
in
winter
is higher than in
summer
by far, and the peak hour for
winter
is 9 p.m.
Electricity
traffic experiences fluctuation during all times in
summer
at around 15000 units of
electricity
in
summer
. In
winter
,
electricity
demand hits the bottom at just over 30000 units between 6 and 9 a.m.,
then
increase to 40000 units at 12 a.m. An average English house's
electricity
is used for heating aims, the main kitchen machines, communication devices, and small electronic goods
such
as vacuum cleaners or food mixers.
Moreover
, more than half of the total
electricity
is used for heating rooms and water. The major industrial kitchen machines; ovens, kettles, and washing machines are the second biggest
electricity
usage in an English home. The other fields only represent 30% of the total expenses.
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