is becoming increasingly important andTourism a source of income to many countries, but its disadvantages shouldn't be overlooked . to what extent do you agree or disagree

Although

Linking Words

many

people

Use synonyms

think the

growth

Replace the word

growing

show examples

number of foreign

tourists

Use synonyms

excalate

Correct your spelling

escalate

the revenue for

country

Add an article

the country

show examples

.

However

Linking Words

, it is said that there was plenty of

drawback

Change to a plural noun

drawbacks

show examples

when having a vacation in some

countries'

Change noun form

countries

show examples

is popular. In

this

Linking Words

essay, I will express why I agree with

this

Linking Words

statement. The first reason why the

people

Use synonyms

when a huge number of

people

Use synonyms

flood into the land is because it

cause

Change the verb form

causes

show examples

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

burden

of

Change preposition

on

show examples

the local

people

Use synonyms

. Local

store

Fix the agreement mistake

stores

show examples

increase the price

while

Linking Words

tourists

Use synonyms

are keen on consuming

suvenir

Correct your spelling

souvenirs

or consuming foods.

As a result

Linking Words

, the

inhibitants

Correct your spelling

inhabitants

get more

expansive

Correct your spelling

expensive

show examples

products in their daily life.

For example

Linking Words

, the

nightmarket

Correct your spelling

night market

which

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

is not only the famous Taiwan sites but

also

Linking Words

the inhabitants'

favourit

Correct your spelling

favourite

place to spend

thier

Correct your spelling

their

spare time or

having

Wrong verb form

have

show examples

a meal.

Nevertheless

Linking Words

, the prices of food are going up five times since the

tourists

Use synonyms

are more and more

through out

Correct your spelling

throughout

show examples

the whole country.

Thus

Linking Words

, many

people

Use synonyms

rather move away from the city. The second reason why raising

tourists

Use synonyms

making

Wrong verb form

makes

show examples

the land area

become

Change the verb form

becomes

show examples

insecure is

because

Replace the word

that

show examples

there

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

a

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

normous

Correct your spelling

enormous

trouble when the crime happened by local

people

Use synonyms

to the

tourists

Use synonyms

.

For instance

Linking Words

, if

tourists

Use synonyms

lost their property in Europe, it needs a lot of

documants

Correct your spelling

documents

and an

accurated

Correct your spelling

accurate

translation for the process.

In other words

Linking Words

, it makes the

tourists

Use synonyms

feel

insecurity

Replace the word

insecure

show examples

and the local police cannot

affort

Correct your spelling

afford

more

crime

Replace the word

criminal

show examples

cases,

then

Linking Words

exacebate

Correct your spelling

exacerbate

exacerbated

the public order. In conclusion,

this

Linking Words

essay argued that growing

tourists

Use synonyms

are not as

pleasure

Replace the word

pleasant

show examples

as the

the

Remove the redundancy

apply

show examples

money that inhabitants earned. In my opinion,

people

Use synonyms

should notice the drawback

by

Change preposition

of

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

tourism brought to , and

then

Linking Words

finding

Wrong verb form

find

show examples

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

solution to balance the

tourists

Use synonyms

and inhabitants.