The chart desplays the percentage of people using internet, and the pie chart shows the avarage of spending on shooping on the internet in different countries
The Bar chart depicts the
percentage
of people
utilizing the Internet
in five different countries (Sweden
, the UK
, Germany
, France
, and Spain
), and the Pie chart displays the rate of money allocated by people
to shop online in several countries in Europe (Sweden
, UK
, Germany
, France
, and Spain
).
In general, the huge percentage
of people
using the Internet
is in Sweden
, followed by UK
and Germany
, and the least are France
and Spain
. In addition
, Spain
was the highest percentage
in terms of people
using the Internet
for online shopping.
The percentage
of internet
users in Sweden
is the highest, accounting for 35 %, followed by the UK
(20 %) and Germany
(15 %) respectively. While
France
only contributes 10 % and the least is Spain
which is donate just 5%.
Furthermore
, there is a huge amount of money spent on online shopping in the UK
accounting for 87, while
Sweden
donate (76) and France
(57) respectively, but Germany
only give 46 and the least is Spain
just contribute 10 for the total.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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