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You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony. Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: – Explain that you have completed your studies – Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code – Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for

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Dear Mom and Dad, I hope you doing well. I writing
this
 letter regarding to invite to my convocation ceremony which is going to be next week. Well, I am so glad to tell you that I have completed my 3 years of degree in bachelor of computer applications
this
 month . I know you both feel so proud of me as I have cleared my examination with good marks . You both encouraged me whenever I felt demotivated during these years . Anyhow,
this
 ceremony in the 4th of June and its starting time will be around 10 am. So, you must be there in half an hour.
Moreover
,my college allotted a dress code
according to
 which dad has to wear formal clothes and mom should be traditional clothes. My college has provided four tickets to each student to invite their family members .
Therefore
, two tickets are for both of you and two are for my brother and sister. I really want to meet all of you as we do not meet for so long . I am very excited about the coming week's ceremony .Hope to you as soon as yours truly, Pooja Panchal
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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