You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: · Explain your varied achievements over the past two years · Express your interest in growing with the company · Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion

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Dear Mr Smith, I saw an advertisement that our

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is looking for a senior software developer .I am writing

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letter regarding my promotion as I am working as a junior software developer for the

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two years. I completed two projects for the

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under your supervision

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year.

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, I have a public project for the

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when the senior developer of the project took an emergency from work. I think

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was my biggest achievement since I handled

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project alone. I feel grateful that I am working in

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well-known business. I want to get

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job so that I can play a major role to grow

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company

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. I have many clients in developed countries.

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this

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job can be an opportunity for me to make our

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progress by interacting with these clients. I would appreciate it if you could me a time for a meeting to discuss the benefits for the

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if I will get a promotion. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Nick Jones

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

179 words

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