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You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: · Explain your varied achievements over the past two years · Express your interest in growing with the company · Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion

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Dear Mr Smith, I saw an advertisement that our
company
 is looking for a senior software developer .I am writing
this
 letter regarding my promotion as I am working as a junior software developer for the
last
 two years. I completed two projects for the
company
 under your supervision
last
 year.
In addition
, I have a public project for the
company
 when the senior developer of the project took an emergency from work. I think
this
 was my biggest achievement since I handled
this
 project alone. I feel grateful that I am working in
this
 well-known business. I want to get
this
 job so that I can play a major role to grow
this
company
. I have many clients in developed countries.
Therefore
this
 job can be an opportunity for me to make our
company
 progress by interacting with these clients. I would appreciate it if you could me a time for a meeting to discuss the benefits for the
company
 if I will get a promotion. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Nick Jones
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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