The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table chart gives information about jobless men and women in
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Kingdom in the past year and what they did in their free time. Units are measured in percentages.
Overall
, the mornings were occupied with chores for both genders and the afternoons,
on the other hand
, were left for more leisure activities. Mornings were very busy for women as most of them were working around the house, shopping and searching for a job (49%, 26% and 16% respectively). Afternoons still involved those activities ( housework 21% and shopping 17%), but the female part
also
had appointments with their friends and family (17%) and watched TV (12%). The
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part of their day was engaged with things like staying in bed and playing some kind of sport (both 0%). About 20% of the men spent their mornings the same as women: in domestic chores, purchasing items and hunting for a job. 13% of the men were working in the garden in the afternoon and 14% of them were watching TV.
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