Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.

Some individuals consider that
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an education palace
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education
palaces should be
avilable
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available
to all
leaners
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learners
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. Others think that higher
education
should be
avilable
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available
only to smart
students
. In
this
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both aspects of
this
issue will be
elleborated
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elaborated
celebrated
.
First,
I agree with
this
statment
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statement
that only
students
who
keen
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are keen
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on learning should
continiue
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continue
their
education
.
This
is because
,
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apply
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learners who
have
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apply
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aim
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the aim
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to
achive
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achieve
will be
preperaring
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preparing
for exams strictly.
Moreover
,
students
who plan to go
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to universities
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universities
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university
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always
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are always
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interested in learning
prosses
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the prosses
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.
Furthermore
,
students
who plan to go
collegue
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colleague
college
will learn from their
classmaters
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classmates
and teachers. Turning to the other side of the
arguments
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argument
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if all
students
want to go to universities
who
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that
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will do some
works
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work
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such
as plumper,
electrican
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electrician
and so on.
Besides
, more
education
means more burden for
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the governement
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governement
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government
.
This
is because
,
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apply
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state
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the state
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should investigate only
education
area
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areas
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.
However
, there are different areas that
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the governement
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governement
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government
should pay attention
.
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In addition
, all pupils have no equal abilities, some of them
more
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are more
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capable and absorb all
knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
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fastly
while
others do not want even open
book
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books
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.
For example
, a friend of mine wanted to be
chef
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a chef
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, but his family did not
allowed
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allow
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him to do it and made him
to
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apply
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go to university.
To sum
up
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all mentioned above I think all children should not to go
collegues
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colleagues
college
. The young who have
intention
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the intention
an intention
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and at the same time learning skills should choose higher
education
.
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