You currently live in a rental apartment, and the noise from your neighbours disturbs you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter describe how this situation affects you; explain what steps you have taken to address the problem;

#apartment #noise #neighbours #landlord #situation #steps #address

I am writing

this

letter in connection with the noise from another

apartment

which is next to my room. I am currently pursuing a master's degree at McMaster

university

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University

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and I have been living in

this

apartment

since

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for

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3 years. My

apartment

number is 399 and the people who are living next to me, moved

last

month. They

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party late

night

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at night

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with unbearable music and they

also

shouted a lot,

talk

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and talk

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with each other in very loud

voice

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voices

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Moreover

, they have one dog who barks all the time, which affects me

alot

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a lot

, as I am a student doing

Mathematics

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a Mathematics

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course, in

this

noisy environment, which is quite difficult and hard for me to focus on my studies. To eliminate the

voice

, I tried various steps,

such

as I closed my windows,

all

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and all

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doors,

used

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using

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earpods

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earpads

, and

also

tried

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trying

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to wake up early morning, but they create

voice

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voices

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all the time to make their

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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disturbed. I am requesting

you

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apply

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If you could talk with them regarding

to slow

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down their

voice

change

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changing

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their

apartment

, as it is really getting

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apply

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worse situation day by day. I look forward to hearing from you to resolve

this

matter at your early convenience. Your's

faithfully

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, Amandeep

kaur

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Kaur

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The Greeting

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Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

206 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Greeting

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