The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram gives information about the work over
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the
glass
.
Overall
, it can be seen that processing this
material for reusing it is a cyclical method with no start and end that contains different stages.
Using glass
items is very common in everyday life and is the first and the last
step of the run. The next step is
throwing it in the right bin for reprocessing. After that, there is one step that illustrates the transportation of the waste and delivering it to the treatment plant. The glass
is then
cleaned with the use of specific machines that provide washing and sterilising.
The next three stages are linked with remodelling the form of the item by breaking it into smaller pieces and melting it. Then
, there is a machine that provides the new shape and the new product as well. Finally
, we return to the first stage of delivery, using and throwing the glass
. The process begins again.Submitted by delulcheva on
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