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With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Technology is increasing tremendously every single
day
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. The
Internet
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 has offered a vast variety of benefits and some
people
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 think that it will take over newspapers in upcoming future. Will everybody be able to access the
internet
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 with
such
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 ease? I partially agree
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 the statement and will explain both sides in upcoming paragraphs. It is an undeniable fact that technology has major benefits to individuals, easy to use and very convenient is one of them. It offers
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easiest way to access any information posted online
whereas
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, it is hard to find particular
news
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 in a newspaper and
people
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 have to wait until the next
day
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 to hold their hand on a fresh bunch of
news
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.
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,
people
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 can find international
news
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 on the
internet
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,
on the other hand
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, newspapers generally focus on local
news
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 of a particular area.
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, checking the weather of foreign countries is quite easy on
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Internet
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 and completely impossible with a newspaper, as it usually delivers
news
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 about the local climate. On
contrary
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, everyone in our society is not aware of the
internet
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. Elderly
people
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,
for example
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, do not know how to use the
internet
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 and are in the habit of reading papers every
day
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. For
such
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people
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, the importance of the
internet
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 is zero and they rely on traditional methods of delivering
news
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.
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, sometimes
due to
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 bad connections or any other issues,
people
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 are unable to access the
internet
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, at that time newspapers hold their backs on daily
news
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.
To conclude
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, there are countless benefits of using the
internet
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, resulting in increasing popularity of the
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day
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 by
day
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 but some masses are not as aware of the technology and rely on paper-based
news
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.
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