There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: •describe what the problem with the changing rooms is •say what happened the last times you complained • explain what you want the manager to do.

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Dear Sir, With due respect, I am writing

this

letter to complain about the mismanagement of the changing rooms in the sports centre.

Firstly

, the cupboards in the changing rooms are extremely untidy with a lot of insects roaming around.

In addition

to that, all the hangers inside have been broken, and no one could find a better place to hang their clothes. How could anyone place their clothes on

such

smelly shelves?

Secondly

, I registered a few complaints to the management staff of the centre regarding

this

issue, and they assured me every time that the problem would be resolved in a few days. But when I visited yesterday, I experienced the same stingy smell coming out of the cupboards that made me sick.

Lastly

, I would be immensely grateful to you if you look into

this

matter as soon as possible, and could arrange new cupboards

along with

hangers.

Moreover

, fumigation of wooden material would definitely help in reducing the insects. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Marium

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