some people think it is better to rent an accommodation than own it. while others disagree saying that owning a property has many advantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some think that rental accommodation has more benefits,

while

others, including me, believe that having your own place has more cons.

Although

renting accommodation in order to not pay more for the

house

at the start is fine, after a

while

people

have to have their own property to provide for their family. On the one hand, most

of

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people

rent

houses when they have some trouble with money and they cannot provide their own place to live. Because most of the

people

at the start are poor. If not include rich parents who provide for their children, it is a common thing in

this

world.

For example

, especially teenagers who are enrolled on the university have to work and

while

they working they have to pay for the

rent

, which is more university.

However

, I believe that

after

this

teenage ,life

people

have to have their own place in order to provide for their family in the near future.

On the other hand

,

while

people

live on their own property they do not have to worry about something.

For instance

, if they do not pay their

rent

, they will be evicted by the government.

In addition

, gather their furniture for a particular time,

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it is expensive to buy a property, but I am sure that it will be worth it. In conclusion, even though not having your own

house

as a teenager's time is fine, in adult time it is better to invest money in a

house

. As far as I am concerned, in order to not be in stress because of the

rent

issues I believe that living in your own

house

is much better.