with growing population in cities , more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas. Is it positive or negative development.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people in

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urban areas are residing in an apartment with small and no outdoor arena. In my opinion, I certainly believe that

this

trend is a negative development for a few reasons. The first reason is the lack of physical and social activities.

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is because if there is no adequate

space

or no

space

at all in homes that would deprive families from engaging in

get togethers

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on a fresh spot.

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, African fathers enjoy playing football as their leisure

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or narration

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folktales to their children at night. Not only

this

effect will make the family bond weaker, but

also

break community practice in

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community. Another reason why

this

is a negative development is

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lack of

space

to practice farming. To be more precise, some people in

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society plant and harvest vegetables and some other fruits in their

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as their source of income . To illustrate

this

, around

last

year I planted grains

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the backyard of my home which I later made a lot of money out of

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by selling to the marketers.

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, when there

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space

in one’s home, it will affect most of the individuals that rely on farming as their means of making money.

In addition

, unable to do outdoor activities it can

also

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to obesity among individuals. In

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view of the fact that no

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to

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some active tasks like gardening and running around.

As a result

, they will become obese because of the consumption of too much

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food without regular exercise. In conclusion, inadequate

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space

in

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urban areas can lead

obesity

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and

also

some individuals to sustain their daily needs.

For

this

reason, one should balance and consider the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small home