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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart illustrates data on the ages of the populations in 2000 and projections for 2050 in Yemen and Italy.
Overall
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, in 2050, Yemen's youngsters' ages will be reduced.
However
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, productive and elderly groups will increase. Meanwhile, the community of
people
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 under 14 and 60+
years
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 in Italy will decrease, and society between 15-59 will rise extremely.
To begin
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 with, in 2000, Yemen's population under 14
years
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 old was 50.1%, the 15-59 group was 46.3%, and
people
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 above 60 were 3.6%. In the future, in 2050, the group under 14 will decrease to 37.0%, and the population between 15-59 will slightly increase to 57.3%.
People
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 more than 60
years
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 will rise to 5.7%
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, the number of Italian youngsters in 2000 was 61.1.% more than half population. The 15-59
years
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 community was 24.1%, and the elderly
people
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 were 14.3%. 50
years
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 later, the projection for 0-14
years
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 old will decrease to 46.2%, the productive ages will rise to 42.3%, and the older
people
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 will fall to 11.5%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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