the table shows the average time and money spent at different types of restaurants

the table shows the average time and money spent at different types of restaurants
The table shows how much
time
and money customers spend on average at
three
different types of restaurants. The cost of a meal in each of the
three
dining rooms is significantly different. there is
also
a significant difference in spending
time
eating. the average of both
lunch
and banquet is very different in each of the
three
types of dining room. A fast-food customer spends on average $4.50 for
lunch
and $5.00 for
dinner
. at a cafeteria,
on the other hand
, the average cost for
three
meals is $7.00 and costs more than twice as much as a fast-food
lunch
, and
dinner
is more than
three
times as expensive. Following the consumers at each of these restaurants
also
spend different amounts of
time
eating.
Lunch
and
dinner
at a fast-food restaurant take only 20
minutes
on average. At the
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cafeteria they take 30
minutes
and 45
minutes
, respectively. Meanwhile, a customer at a sit-down restaurant spends 45
minutes
eating
lunch
and 60
minutes
eating
dinner
. In general, customers who spend less on food
also
spend less
time
eating,
while
those who spend more money on restaurant meals
also
spend more
time
eating them.
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