With a fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast foods for the main meals? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Fast
foods
have been in controversy since it was invented. They are considered as
blessing by almost all busy Correct your spelling
a
people
around the world. Some people
think that these are rubbish foods
. But in my opinion, this
is a food
that gives life to people
just like home cooked
meals.
Fast Add a hyphen
home-cooked
food
has been in
the scene for more than a century. It has been a blockbuster Change preposition
on
to
every country in the world. There are various reasons why Change preposition
for
people
are patronising it. Firstly
, it provides meal
in less than 15 minutes. Fix the agreement mistake
meals
People
do not need to wait for hours just to have a meal. For instance
, office workers tend to purchase their meal during breaks from fast foods
as it has less waiting time and they could even use some of the excess time on other things. Secondly
, it is convenient to
everyone. Fast Change preposition
for
foods
are on each
every corner of the street. They do not need to travel far just to avail a meal. Correct determiner usage
apply
Lastly
, it is cheap. During this
recession times, Correct determiner usage
these
people
are aiming towards eating cheap meals in order for them to use the money to
other important things like medicine or Change preposition
for
for
education.
Change preposition
apply
However
, there are few
drawbacks Correct article usage
a few
with
fast Change preposition
to
food
. Based from
research, they are very unhealthy to consume. Fast Change preposition
on
foods
are said to be tastier because of all the oil and other cheap ingredients being used. Also
, it is one of the cause
of the rise of malnutrition in the world. Change to a plural noun
causes
People
think that eating in
fast Change preposition
apply
food
is like having a proper meal. According to
studies, regular consumers of fast food
are more prone to cancer than those who are eating home cooked
meals.
Add a hyphen
home-cooked
To conclude
, fast food
is a big help to everyone especially
to places that Add the comma(s)
,especially
has
Change the verb form
have
fast paced
lifestyle. They provide convenience and Add a hyphen
fast-paced
helps
them to save money that they could use for some other things. The advantages of it greatly Correct subject-verb agreement
help
outweighs
the Change the verb form
outweigh
disadvadvantages
. But, it should only be consumed in moderation.Correct your spelling
disadvantages
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