With a fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast foods for the main meals? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Fast
foods
have been in controversy since it was invented. They are considered
as
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blessing by almost all busy
people
around the world. Some
people
think that these are rubbish
foods
. But in my opinion,
this
is a
food
that gives life to
people
just like
home cooked
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meals. Fast
food
has been
in
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the scene for more than a century. It has been a blockbuster
to
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every country in the world. There are various reasons why
people
are patronising it.
Firstly
, it provides
meal
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meals
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in less than 15 minutes.
People
do not need to wait for hours just to have a meal.
For instance
, office workers tend to purchase their meal during breaks from fast
foods
as it has less waiting time and they could even use some of the excess time on other things.
Secondly
, it is convenient
to
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everyone. Fast
foods
are on
each
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every corner of the street. They do not need to travel far just to avail a meal.
Lastly
, it is cheap. During
this
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these
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recession times,
people
are aiming towards eating cheap meals in order for them to use the money
to
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other important things like medicine or
for
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education.
However
, there are
few
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a few
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drawbacks
with
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fast
food
. Based
from
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research, they are very unhealthy to consume. Fast
foods
are said to be tastier because of all the oil and other cheap ingredients being used.
Also
, it is one of the
cause
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of the rise of malnutrition in the world.
People
think that eating
in
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fast
food
is like having a proper meal.
According to
studies, regular consumers of fast
food
are more prone to cancer than those who are eating
home cooked
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meals.
To conclude
, fast
food
is a big help to everyone
especially
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to places that
has
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fast paced
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fast-paced
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lifestyle. They provide convenience and
helps
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them to save money that they could use for some other things. The advantages of it greatly
outweighs
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the
disadvadvantages
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disadvantages
. But, it should only be consumed in moderation.
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