The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the cash, used by tourists in the United Kingdom between the
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1980 and 2010. Units are measured in millions. The chart provides information about why they travelled to the UK in 1980 and 2010. Units are measured in percentages.
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, there is a significant increase in the amount of money that travellers spent in the country and holidays and business were the two main reasons for their visit. Numbers are revealing that the
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between 1980 and 1985 were the lowest for UK income from people, coming abroad with a range between a little under 7,500 and just above 9,000. The peak was reached in the
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between 1995 and 2000 with 12,000 million. In total, percentages increased from the start till the end of the research. The most common reasons for visits were vacations or a trip, related to work in both 1980 and 2010 with rates between 20% and 44%. Visiting friends went up as a popular reason to take a journey in
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country through the
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • steady increase
  • fluctuations
  • overseas visitors
  • significant rise
  • primary reasons
  • pie charts
  • holiday visits
  • business trips
  • visits to friends and relatives
  • expenditure
  • travel options
  • economic factors
  • tourism marketing strategies
  • global travel priorities
  • proportions
  • changing
  • correlate
  • reflect
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