The bar chart illustrated the amount of houses constructed yearly in two cities ( Derby and Nottingham) during the period from 2000 to 2009.

The given bar chart illustrates the information of

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construction per annum in two different cities which are Derby and Nottingham, from 2000 to 2009.

Overall

, it can be clearly seen that the

number

of

houses

in Darby had

upward

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trend,

while

Nottingham

was fluctuated

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. 2009 was the highest

number

of

houses

built for both

of

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years

. Looking at the details, as regards for Derby, started at just under 50 home

building

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in 2000 and

then

it

was remain

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stable in the next year.

Then

, the

number

of

houses

construction

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was the same at approximately 120

houses

for the next four

years

starting

2003

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.

Moreover

, there was

significant

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increase in the rest of the

years

and reached

peak

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at just below 350.

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respect to Nottingham, 50

houses

was

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built in 2000 and

this

number

was higher than Derby's

houses

in the same year. There was a fluctuation

number

for the next five

years

and the home construction was recorded to around 80

houses

before falling to around 2 in 2006.

Furthermore

, the highest recorded of

home

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homes

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built was 250

houses

in

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the end of the recorded year.