Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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use their

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is a controversial topic today, as it is becoming increasingly common among kids and teenagers all over the world.

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has got two main reasons and there are valid opinions on both sides of the question that whether

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change is positive or negative which I will discuss now. Perhaps the main reason for

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is the lack of attractive physical entertainment for

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. Many

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spend much

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using their

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in order to play video games and if a child decides not to use his smartphone anymore and do another game

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, he would not find anything interesting in the real world. A

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cause would be the behaviour of

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's parents. Some parents do not teach their

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significantly about how a smartphone should be used and they do not set any limitations for their kids in order to strict them in using these gadgets. On the one hand, opponents of

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consider that spending too much

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using

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could lead to physical and mental problems. Seating for too long in a certain position might cause backbone diseases.

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, it is said that

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who spend long periods of

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on their phones usually meet serious psychological issues

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as depression or anger syndromes.

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, it is said that it is good for young people to keep themselves up to date and be able to use new technology products.

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, the world is changing rapidly and the way of study or work is changing too.

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are able to take online courses or even work online at a young age and earn money which are positive consequences of

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, I feel using

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for long hours by young people and

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which is caused by different events, is generally a positive development as long as it does not injure

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and does not put their health at risk.