Organizing a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problems. What can be the problems associated with organizing a large family event and what solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

It’s clear that running a large family

celebration

can cause many

problems

. in the following essay, I will discuss the

problems

and mention how you can solve

it

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. There are two

problems

that large families

are encounter

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to them.

Firstly

,

preparation

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the preparation

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of

party

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the party

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takes many hours

such

as inviting

people

, making food, getting dressed, cleaning the house etc. so the

people

who want to be

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the host

a host

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host

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hosts

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of

party

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the party

a party

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,

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will be exhausted.

Secondly

, setting up a

party

cost too much money because nowadays

people

are strict on

have

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having

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luxury

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a luxury

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party

. They prefer to invite guests

in

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to

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luxury

hotel

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hotels

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and

restaurant

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restaurants

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.

More over

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Moreover

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they invite

numerous

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as numerous

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people

as they can as and

consequently

they have to

paid

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a lot for all of them.

However

, there are many ways to tackle

to

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apply

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this

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these

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problems

. One thing,

they

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is they

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can get help from their relatives or hire someone to divide tasks

to

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among

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others.

For instance

, these days there are many companies that are prepared to service

about

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apply

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parties. The other ones,

people

don’t have to hold luxury

celebration

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celebrations

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, they should manage the

party

based on their budget.

Also

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,Also

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they can

holding

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hold

be holding

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celebration

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a celebration

the celebration

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in

ordinary

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an ordinary

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hotel , catering wonderful but low cost,

furthermore

inviting limited relatives to spend less money and save money to have more

party

in the future. In conclusion, setting

a

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up a

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celebration

by

large

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a large

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family can cost a lot and they encounter

to

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apply

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time

shortage

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shortages

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but these issues can be solved in some way.