The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the amount of money and where it comes from in many categories in one area of Britain
while
the pie chart demonstrates where it will be spent and the proportion of each one in 2017 and 2018. The unit is in million euros.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that salaries always account for the highest percentage in both 2017 and 2018. Another striking factor is that the total budget in 2018 is higher than when compared to 2017. In terms of buildings and transport, its figure was 17% either in 2017 or 2018
while
there was almost a double down in technology from 2017 to 2018, 8% and 14% respectively. The most spent in both years is salaries when it occupied almost three quarters (75% in 2017 and 69% in 2018) One prominent from
this
data is national government provide the most money for the police budget
while
other sources, its figure is 4.5 times lower when compared to the national government (38 against 175 and 38.5 against 177.8)
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