Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree ?

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people

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everywhere and

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, especially in

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course and partially in offline classes. The

advantages

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is the flexibility of

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to

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can choose when they want to

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that

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their own

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. Analysing the deterioration of

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discipline

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the unreach of the priority to

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need a strict

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to make them have a responsibility to do something,

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study

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schedule

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makes

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strive to carry out the activities on

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plan, they will

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not

fullfil

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and might cause a lack of

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time

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is one of a kind reason that

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should not

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to choose their

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know that studies

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activity,

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people

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like to

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does

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not know the priority of

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tend to choose

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to

playing

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and

having

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fun with their friends than looking

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textbook for

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why

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to make their own

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management. To summarise, the freedom to choose

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to

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and play by

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is cause a lack of

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and the priority of

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can not be reached. It

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that

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are allowed to have their

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management to

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and have fun. After

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thoroughly

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analysis

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subject, it is predicted that the adverse effect of

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management by

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greater

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than the positive effects.