Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, there are some facilities that

makes

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people

can

study

everywhere and

everytime

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, especially in

online

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course and partially in offline classes. The

advantages

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is the flexibility of

time

to

study

,

therefore

students

can choose when they want to

study

. It

is disagreed

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that

students

can

considered

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their own

time

. Analysing the deterioration of

time

discipline

,

as well as

the unreach of the priority to

study

.

Firstly

,

people

need a strict

schedule

to make them have a responsibility to do something,

included

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study

.

Demanding

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schedule

makes

people

strive to carry out the activities on

schedule

.

For example

, caused of get used to doing something without any

clearly

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plan, they will

have

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not

fullfil

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fulfil

the given

schedule

and might cause a lack of

discipline

of

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time

.

Discipline

is one of a kind reason that

students

should not

allowed

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to choose their

time

.

Secondly

, all

people

know that studies

is

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a

boredom

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activity,

less

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fewer

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people

like to

study

. Some

people

does

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not know the priority of

study

is

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apply

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.

For instance

,

students

tend to choose

much

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more

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time

to

playing

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and

having

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fun with their friends than looking

a

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textbook for

an hours

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hours

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.

That is

why

students

should not

allowed

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be allowed

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to make their own

time

management. To summarise, the freedom to choose

time

to

study

and play by

students

is cause a lack of

discipline

and the priority of

study

can not be reached. It

is disagree

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that

students

are allowed to have their

time

management to

study

and have fun. After

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thoroughly

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analysis

on

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this

subject, it is predicted that the adverse effect of

time

management by

students

will always

greater

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than the positive effects.