The graph below shows the changes in the places where people used to surf the Internet in the years 1998, 2000, 2002 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given column graph compares the changes in the places where the
community
accessed the Internet
between 1998 and 2004. It is clear that
the maximum number of communities surfed the Internet
from home
in all the given years
.
It can be seen from the graph that more community
surfed the Internet
at home
and in their working places than in colleges and libraries. The percentage
of people who accessed the Internet
from home
fell from approximately 55 in 1998 to 48 in 2000. After ,that this
percentage
began to rise steadily and reached 55 in 2004. The second most common place where the community
accessed the net was the office. The proportion of the community
who spent their online time at work was between 25% and 30% from 1998 to 2002,
but fell to 15% in 2004. Approximately 18%-25% of people used the Remove the comma
apply
Internet
at college in all the given years
. The least percentage
surfed the net in libraries. This
percentage
fluctuated between 12% and 18% over the given years
.
Overall
, the discrepancy between people surfing the net from home
and all other places was high in all four given years
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